Monday, June 04, 2007

Enna Koduma Sir Idhu... (incomplete)


scene 1


jean wakes up from a bad dream... his gf got raped and her throat got slit... wipes his face, takes a deep breath and goes back to sleep

next scene

cell 312, mental facility

a guy is sitting in a corner, hitting the wall - like hes stabbing someone (not showing his face)

next scene

jean's bedroom:
jean wakes up, watches the security video as he usually does every morning - in the vdo stream, ray (son of the villain) injects jean with a drug and yells/swears at him (for sleeping with his sister) - ray says, the drug will kill jean in another 3 hrs!

jean gets mad, crashes everything in his room & smokes out in his car... on his way, drinks lots of coffee, energy drinks, swallows energy capsules, commits a crime deliberately and makes the cops to chase him (just to increase his adrenaline)

the villain (ray's father) has a rival, jean works for the rival, jean goes to him/her for help, but (s)he wont help

next scene

kills ray and each of his mates in a sickening, bloody, graphic manner (shooting on the groin, cutting fingers, smashing feet with sledge hammer, slitting throats, cutting limbs, squeezing out eyeballs etc...)

on his way, goes to his gf, makes (wild) love (again, just to keep his heart pumping), and takes her with him

next scene

he goes to the boss's place... all alone

jean standing on one side (camera behind jean, just showing his back... slowly moves up, up and to the top and exposes a fleet of men on the other side staring at jean fully armed - all of then in leather jackets, suits, etc...)

the villain is now with jean's actual boss (they both signed a truce and would want to eliminate jean)

one of the villain's bodyguards tries to shoot jean, but ends up killing his gf (bullet puts a hole on her forehead - she has a blunt look, dark, thick, blood flowing out of the hole slowly and some smoke comes out of the hole too...)

gf is falling down in slow motion, jean holds her and lays her on the ground, sheds a drop of tear, (camera follows tear in slow motion) by the time the drop touches the ground, (hearing chopper sounds) around 50 guys drop out from the sky (from 3 choppers)

a common enemy (Japanese mafia?) to both the boss & the villain, helps jean (and himself ) in eliminating them

the fight begins, goes on, gun shots, flying bullets, splashing blood/flesh, piled up bodies, punctured walls... (similar to matrix climax - slow motion, sudden FFs etc...)

freeze the screen while... (Camera goes around, slowly... time freeze?)

a knife is very near to a guy's throat, a bullet is right next to guy's chest, a guy's fist right below another guy's chin, jean is about to stab the villain

next scene

mental facility, cell 312

guy still stabbing on the wall (unclear, shaken, glared scene)

next scene

all the frozen stuff are now shown in slow motion except for the ending parts, ex. the knife getting close to chest, fist getting close to chin, and FF suddenly the actual stab, blood squirting out, the jaw breaking punch, the stab from jean to the boss and slow down again... show everything again, the ending part... jean is stabbing the boss, again and again and again...

next scene

mental facility, cell 312

guy still stabbing on the wall (unclear, shaken, glared scene)

next scene

5 yrs back

jean, in 12th grade... fails in final exams, decides to commit suicide, goes to the top of a high raised building, (shaky, smudged screen - diff color scheme?)

but gets dizzy and faints (falls with a thud)

next scene

wakes up in a hospital, gets discharged, and sees this wonderful, gorgeous beautiful girl on his way out & falls in love with her

next scene

the suicide thing makes him delusional

the girl, the boss, him being a mobster, him getting the injection... everything is imaginary

everything he has done and that has happened to him are imaginary, but...

the murders are real...

he has been killing innocent ppl and kids. for him, they appeared like villains, but they were actually normal ppl/kids on the streets, houses etc

next scene

his doctor explains what happened to jean, his story, his medical condition to the medical assistant on their way.

screen splits into 2 (vertical, one in black n white and the other in color, but with some diff color scheme)

each imaginary killing is shown in one part of the screen and the actual killing in the other part - both should be in totally diff locations, lighting, makeup, costumes etc...

next scene

gets caught by the cops, hung upside down, gets beaten up real bad

then admitted to a mental facility

next scene

cell 312, mental facility

guy still stabbing on the wall

camera goes close to him

he/camera turns around...

he does not look anything like jean, has a completely diff physical appearance

next scene

he is being taken out from his cell for a medical exam by the doctor and the medical assistant

next scene

doctor lies on the ground, dead! with blood all over himself and on the floor

jean getting beaten up by the medical assistant, security guys are fast approaching, alarm went off, ppl running around the hospital, hearing screams etc...

the guy had finally killed the villain... he sits next to the wall with a (relieved) smile and tears.

Manidhan-Ver.3.1.0 (incomplete)

Black screen

Absolute Silence
...

A tiny pale yellow dot appears in the middle of the black screen

Becomes bigger, n bigger, n bigger... (Camera zooming in), fills quarter of the center screen

It Explodes (No sound yet (light travels faster))

BOOOOOOM, the vibrating, ear blowing BOOOOOOM

Explosion - yellow/orange light expands from the center in the form of a disc and irregular shapes in all directions, like a round object filled with magma exploding

Camera still zooming (Animation - moving deeper in Z axis)... Faster n Faster...

Getting closer....

Rocks scattering out of the explosion... 10s, 100s, 1000's...

There is this One Rock, out of the millions coming right in the direction of the camera, whooshhh!! Camera dodges it, take a U turn and Follows the Rock

Its just so fast, we can keep up, we loose pace, and then catch up (Camera slows down and picks up speed)

Following Rock in steady speed now

Other Rocks, Flaming Rocks, particles bits, pieces flying by, some so close to the sides of the camera, flying with whooshing speeds, some hitting the Camera (Rumbling/Shaking Effect)

Then a HUUUUUGE, Gigantic ROCK just smashes the Rock that the Camera was following from the Left

The Camera almost Crashed on it... but didn’t... stops like 1 mm, by then HUUUUUGE, Gigantic ROCK moves away, Camera follows the HUUUUUGE, Gigantic ROCK now

I slows down, gets hit by other tiny rocks, passes through a Huge gaseous region, now the Huge Rock become a Tiny dot

Camera passes through the clouds, suddenly starts rotating (like toilet flush). Camera zooms back, far away and the Huge cloud itself is rotating. Lots of exlposions occur, lots of particles fly around. The center becomes dark and bright, whole cloud still rotating

Fast Forward

Slow Down

Sun is formed

Fast Forward

All the Planets are formed one by one

Slow Down

Earth if formed

Zoom into Earth

It rotates, changes shape, Spits fire, burps smoke, coughs ashes

Its like somebody trapped inside this giant fire ball

Fast Forward

Slow down

Moon is formed

Fast Forward

Zoom back, away from the Solar system

All the Stuff spat, coughed, sneezed etc, change into different formations, some form lumps here and there, they collide, they bounce off, all sorts of circusy acts, the Solar System is Formed.

Camera starts traveling again by the other Planets, starting from the 10th planet, then Pluto and slowly near Earth

No atmosphere, just plain brown Earth, no life nothing

** All the below happen fast - Fast Forwarded animation **

Camera travels round and round and jumps in to the Water, the loose molecules getting to gether , the bubble formation, the 1st Cell, 1st DNA formation, the Plants, the Plants with Gills, the Worms, the fish, the Fish with Fins, the Amphibians, the Reptiles, the Dinosaurs, the Birds, the Dinosaur extinction, the Mammals, the Monkeys, (Baboons & Chimps)

**Camera slows, and comes back to play mode**
Camera follows 2 Chimps, 1 male chimp hitting (flirting) on a female chimp, a big chimp (father) comes out from the bush and beats the crap out of the the male chimp out

**Fast Forward**
Chimps evolve into Ape men

**Play Mode**
Camera follows 2 Apes, 1 male Ape hitting (flirting) on a female Ape, a big Male Ape (father) jumps from the Tree branch above with a bug Thud and beats the crap out of the male Ape

**Fast Forward**
Ape men evolve into the current Humans

**Play Mode**
Camera follows 2 humans, its a bus stop. 1 male human hitting (flirting) on a female human, a big Female human who is a Cop, jumps out of the Police jeep and beats the crap out of the male Ape

**Fast Forward**
Camera moves, current cars start flying, building rise sky high all the usual sci fi 'futuristic' looks come up

**Super Fast Forward**
In this mode, we can only see colorful lights, streaking the screen, like how it appears while a digital camera is shot in Night Mode from a moving train

**Slowing down**

~Have traveled almost 3 million years~

Whole screen is bright Yellow, cant see it directly, like looking at the Morning Sun with naked eyes

Camera zooms back slowly...

Zooming out from Sun

Sun is HUMONGOUS now!

Still Zooming out

Zoomed out and the Camera is outside the solar System

Sun had consumed, Mars and Venus, in the course of its expansion

Its Earth, which is right next to the Sun now. There are no more "9" planets in the Solar System, which is dying.

...

hmmm

...

All the above animations should happen in around 5 minutes max, while I'm showing the Titles/Casting etc.

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Scene 1:

Black screen (again)

Mild wooosh, crrrp, crrrppp tk tk tk… sounds…

Lights On

Close, Profile shot on Kamal Hassan’s not clearly shown face, it is hidden partly by some object

Camera zooming out, very Slowly, from Kamal’s face

Still zooming out

He seems to be sitting by a tiny glassed rhombus shaped window

Still zooming out

He seems to be sitting in a train

Still zooming out

He is sitting in a train

Still zooming out

He is sitting in a train that is traveling from Earth to Moon, thru the transparent tube tunnel

He is going to his office; it is located in the Moon.

What his Company does: Since Sun is going to die in another 3 million years, they are working on 2 things, one is to move the Earth far away from Sun, so that it doesn’t suffer the damage and second is to make it independent of the Sun.

He is the Lead for the first project.

Scene 2:

(Office)

Camera is in a grey colored room

Cut.

Camera is following Kamal, pointing at his head, slowly zooming out (He is entering his boss’s office, the grey colored room)

Madhan Bob (The guy who keeps laughing for everything), in a totally different, stylish, out of of the world, but Funny get up appears as a holographic 3d image

Note:
After 3 million years, I do not know what language would the humans be speaking. I would be coming up with a language that is different from our current World languages, but it might probably have slight pinches from some of it here and there.

But, I would be enlightening the audience with English, Tamil and Thanglish Subtitles and will be using that here too…

Also, I need to work on the Looks of the Humans and other creatures. They would have evolved and would definitely have a totally different physical appearance.

Kamal: Sir.. awww…vandhu… andha… awww… Leave pathi solli irundheney. Adutha vaaram, adhaan remind panradhukku vandhuen

Madhan Bob: He he he he he, yov, adha marandhutten ya, unnaku oru project assign panni irukka, adha adutha veilli kezhama kulla mudichaaganum un vacation-a adutha Varushathukku thalli vai

Note: Since the Sun became so big, the TIME changes. Earth’s Rotation and Revolution times change, so the Morning, evening concepts change. Since Sun is so Big and Earth is so close to it, the shadow formed on the other side of it is so tiny, that the Night actually lasts only for a few minutes.

Hours are the new minutes, Weeks are the new Hours… you get the picture!

Scene 3:

Kamal, walks out of the Boss’s room with a Long, Sad face

He gets on to his Hover pod and he floats on it takes him to the train station. On the way, he sees this (holographic/3D) advertisement board on the wall, with a lady talking about this really cool deal. It is a Travel Agency, but with a Difference.

Scene 4:

That travel agency office.

Kamal is waiting in the waiting area while watching their holographic/3D tours displayed

He is invited to an Agent’s office. He walks in. He gets all the details. Camera is outside the glass room, we cant hear what they are talking.

Kamal walks out with a Relieved, Happy face.

Scene 5:

A Residential area… Not the one that comes up in our minds always, the one with birds chirping, dogs barking at a distance, a long, a calm street, with identical houses, with a few kids on the road, playing , cycling, hitting each other, a few cars parked on the sides, neighbors, chatting, some people mowing lawn, dogs etc… no, none of these.. hey its after 3 million years, remember?

I’ve not decided yet, but probably, the Earth would not have much on the surface since it is so close to the Sun, all slowly went UNDERGROUND.

The houses are build different, suitable for the underground stuff, people are different, animals are different, some new species, some old species but would have evolved into something else…

Silence

A big Woosh sound all of a sudden…

Few kids are racing

One if flying, one is running faster than the speed of light, one is going completely underground, like the Moles, only wayyy faster

People of the road… Some have 2 heads, some have 6 hands, some have 5 eyes, some walk upside down, some have tails, some fly, some are amphibiotic, some can survive in space without oxygen etc, etc

Yes, people have evolved, not mutated… into something they wanted to, into something we all want to, with natural, normal abilities, that are at present considered as Super Powers.

Manidhan – Ver 3.1.0

Scene 6:

One of the kids that was flying, goes home, with the same speed after losing the race.

Note: This kid is neither a Man nor a Woman, but a completely new branch of Human. But for the current audience, I’m going to have him as a Male.

So, he goes to him room and sits on bed but gets knocked off by something on the bed

It is his Sister who can become Invisible. Laughs at him, fights with him and returns to her room.

Kamal, comes home. His wife.. Guathami? Comes home from the bottom.

Gauthami’s office is at Earth’s Core. They work on a project to control the Core’s temperature.

The family gets together and the kids start asking Kamal about the big vacation that was planned for the following week.

Kamal: aaww… mmm… Sorry, Boss vera project assign pannittaru, so adutha vaarapm poga mudiyaadhu… aww… I am .,. awww.. sorry

Kids and Mom are very upset, they start going back to their rooms and Kamal shouts, “adutha vaaram dhaane poga mudiyaadhu, aana namma innikey ippove kelamba poroooooommmm!!!!”

Kids and Mom turn back to him with a mixed emotion on their faces…

They ask whats this all about and Kamal explains about the Travel Agency

Kamal: Naan office mudinji vandhuttu irundhayna, appo oru Ad paarthen, oru Travel Agency Ad, saadhaarna Travel Agency illa, it’s a TIME TRAVEL AGENCY!!!

Yes, namma inniki ippove 100 years to the Past travel panna porm! Idho paarunga passes!!!

Kids and Mom were surprised/shocked/not too excited/not too happy. But still they just packed got their stuff and left for the Agency office. They were welcomed by Kamal’s Agent and the preparations for the travel were going on.

They boarded the Time Machine. It was a huge Starfish shaped machine.

They all were given tranquilizers to sleep during the travel to avoid fatigue.

All of them were given, but Kamal should take it a little later since he had to do the in house preparations for the others.

Machine started, weird noises heard, lighted up in all directions, the machine rose up slowly, rocking back and forth, in a rapid movement

Noises became louder, rocking became faster n faster

Bhoooofff! (A noise) and the screen is Black.

Scene 7:

Screen is still black

Hearing some distant faded noise, slowly becoming loud

It’s a familiar noise

It’s a musical noise

It’s the Thaarai and Thappattai !!! (Saavu Melam)

Getting louder and louder

The music passes by, as if a train passed from right to left… (Doppler effect) Slowly faded, but can still hear it from the distance

A Tamil Paatty’s voice: Thambi… thambi… kozhandha.. indha pa… amma… endhiringa… pozhudhu vidinjidichi… endhiringa.. yeppa, indha pa… adha endhingna

Black Screen

Kamal, slowly opens his eyes, like how we open our eyes from sleep, but his lids open the other way

Unfocused camera (Kamal’s just woken vision) focusing

A weak, old Patty is standing next to Kamal, trying to wake him up

Its Year 2007, they are in a small hut in Nochi Kuppam, near Koovam! (Yes they have traveled back 3 million years!)

Patty: Appa, endhirichiteengala? Unga inga ittandhu, 4 naalu aavudhu, inna ba aachu ungalukku? Ipdi 4 perum adchi potta maadri 4 naala thongine keereengo? Paakardhukku vera oru maariya keereengo? Enna samachaaram? Edhacham naadaga kottailerndhu odi vandhukuneengala???

Scene 8:

Back in the Time machine, after giving the tranquilizers…

To be contd…

Friday, March 25, 2005

Twisted

They were holding their hands tight, eyes shut, butterflies amusing their bellies, hearts pounding, blood streaming all over the body…
The kiss was finally over.

Do you love me?

I love you more than I love my mother, more than I love my Sister, even more than my Wife!

(Smiling) I know, just wanted to hear it from you sweetie.

After the romantic 5 minutes the 2 men started walking towards the car. They had to cross the road. Man 1 ran to the middle following him was Man 2, he was almost near the pavement which was when he was hit by a truck. It ran over his abdomen squeezing out the bowel.
The truck driver did not stop. Man 2’s head came fluttering from the sky and Man 1 caught it. The mouth was wide open, the lower jaw was displaced to the left side, nose crushed in and the right ear was dangling. He was able to see the brain oozing out through the fissure on the head.
He threw it away and drove back home with a big relief.
Honey… I’m home!
Daddy!! Daddy!! did you get me what I asked for?
Err..I’m so sorry son, I totally didn’t forget!!! Here it is!
Wow… you are the greatest, thanks!
Ha ha ha…wheres mom son?
Mom is sleeping with the man who came to sell vacuum cleaners
Hmmm!?
Oh my dear Son, mom is not sleeping, she is dead.
Next to her was the body of the man who came to sell vacuum cleaners.
Daddy, what happened to mom? I was watching them playing for sometime, then this guy was clutching her throat, and I pricked him on to his neck with the meat knife like 25 times, he was still squeezing her neck and both of them went to sleep after that!
You are the greatest, Son!
Thanks Daddy. The same thing happened even last time when the Car guy came to our house, but Mom did no go to sleep that time
That was different Son. You have done a wonderful job. We should celebrate!

Ohh hoo…what are we gonna do Daddy?
Lets get something to drink
Ok Daddy, I’ll have Scotch, on the Rocks…I’ll have in my favorite dino-mug.
ho ho ho…just like your uncle!
No Daddy, like your aunt who slept with our maid, but I did not see them since last year when grand pa shot them!
He is a bad man, he wanted all of us to go to jail, so I put him to sleep, he wont bother us now!
Dad, will you get me a new mom?
Oh Sure son, I’ll get a new mom for Christmas ok?
Cool… you are wonderful Dad! I also need a gun, I’m bored of using the knife all the time!
You got it. Here comes your sis, lets give her some Scotch too.

Hey that is my teletubby!
No its mine
Gimme that you winey bitch, I’m gonna cut you fingers for stealing my teletubby
No, you gotta catch me for that… weeee
Ah ha Gotchya!
Now your fingers, let me actually take your eye balls out so that you cant see my stuff
Noo nooo…
Yess.. Yess… Hahahaha
There… got it!
Eeeww… gggross… its so gooey… feels like my candy when I squeeze it…
mm… tastes like shit! Yuck!
Give that to me you idiot, mom will put it back for me.
No way, mom is gone, she is dead…she will never come back… haa haa haa
Dad is gonna get us…no…just for me… a new mom for Christmas
I’m gonna eat your eye now! I’m gonna eat it.. I’m gonns eat it….
Oops, I dropped in the bowl…oops I accidentally flushed it
You little swine, lemme pay you back. I’m gonna cut your tiny penis and feed my fishes.
Ha Ha… no way, because my friend from my class already cut it. She has it in her freezer. I showed it to her, she liked it so much that she cried for 4 days, and then I just asked her to take it. Since it started to stink after 2 days, her mom asked her to put it in the freezer, so it’s cool now
Oh yeah? you will let pass something from your body when you wake up tomorrow.
Do what you can… hog!
He woke up to see that his mouth was stitched and his finger was glued into his arsehole. He was wondering what could be missing. He turned and looked at the floor to see one of his ear in his cat’s mouth, it was almost done chewing it when he squeezed its throat to make it spit his ear. He finally took out the perforated ear, licked it and stuck it back.
He went to his sister and made funny faces showing his ear and was so pompous that she couldn’t make him loose it.
His dad suddenly flew into the kitchen, cut both the kid’s heads, spread some extra virgin olive oil, some schezuan seasoning, some salt, fresh ground pepper and put them in the oven and kept it at 350 degrees. He had some friends coming over to his apt for a small party for him sucking his boss’s pancreas using a straw!
Room 212, Holy Cross Medical Center. The boss woke up from a dismaying sleep. He felt anxious and a bit agitated. His face was covered with tiny drops of sweat.
He met with an accident 11 years ago. He was injured during a 100 meter bungee jumping; was in coma for 4 years and had lost partial senses after that. Was under treatment for 7 years and that was the day he will be sent home, completing the treatment.

Monde De Intrus

Monde De Intrus - 1.01

NYC, Dec 25th, 2004, 7.30am.

A wet & slushy winter morning in a dirty grey ambience.

Jack's Room:
A single bed beside the window, a closet which is hot as hell, where 2 huge PC Server Racks reside & roar, 6 monitors on 2 tables, and a Super computer - All built by Jack over the period of 3 yrs, Illegally.
A loud honk from an approaching Truck on the street woke Jack up, he was 18 that day. After 6 long years, he could finally use a computer, Legally!
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Atlanta, May 30th, 1998, 8.00am.

A bright & shiny Sunday.
A sudden havoc on the streets, people running around, shouting in joy & sorrow, a few of them fighting, cops and their cars all around, screaming sirens, reporters, cameras, choppers & everything that would normally be present at a place where News is born.

The News: The ATM machines in 3rd, 4th and Sesame streets are spitting MONEY! All the money till the last penny.
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1500 Price St., Atlanta, May 30th, 1998, 11.00am.
Jack's Mom: Jack! are you up from the bed? get ready son, we are late for the Mass.

Jack: (Watching the News, smiling at it or rather grinning at it) Yeah mom, I'll be there in a bit

Both of them go out the front door, Mom turning to lock the door, suddenly hear Sirens approaching them. Mom and Jack turn back to see 3 cop cars and 2 black SUV's (FBI ?) stop in front of their house with screeches. The Officers get/jump out and walk/run towards Jack & his Mom swiftly.

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Monde De Intrus - 1.02

(A brief History)

1960
  • MIT's artificial intelligence lab, become staging grounds for hackers. At first, "hacker" was a positive term for a person with a mastery of computers who could push programs beyond what they were designed to do.
1970
  • Two members of California's Homebrew Computer Club begin making "blue boxes," devices used to hack into the phone system. The members, who adopt handles "Berkeley Blue" (Steve Jobs) and "Oak Toebark" (Steve Wozniak), later go on to found Apple Computer.
1980
  • The FBI busts the Milwaukee-based 414s after members are accused of 60 computer break-ins.
  • At 25, 'veteran hacker' Kevin Mitnick secretly monitors the e-mail of MCI and Digital Equipment security officials.
  • First National Bank of Chicago is the victim of a $70-million computer heist.
  • An Indiana hacker known as "Fry Guy" -- so named for hacking McDonald's -- is raided by law enforcement.
1990
  • AT&T long-distance service crashes on Martin Luther King Jr. Day
  • A 17-month search ends in the capture of hacker Kevin Lee Poulsen ("Dark Dante"), who is indicted for stealing military documents.
  • Hackers break into Griffith Air Force Base, then pewwwte computers at NASA and the Korean Atomic Research Institute.
  • Scotland Yard nabs "Data Stream," a 16-year-old British teenager who curls up in the 'fetal position' when seized.
  • A Texas A&M professor receives death threats after a hacker logs on to his computer from off-campus and sends 20,000 racist e-mail messages using his Internet address.
1995
  • Hackers break into the U.S. Department of Justice, U.S. Air Force, CIA, NASA and other sites. Defense Department computers sustained '250,000' attacks by hackers in 1995 alone.
  • Hackers pierce security in Microsoft's NT operating system to illustrate its weaknesses.
  • Popular Internet search engine Yahoo! is hit by hackers claiming a "logic bomb" will go off in the PCs of Yahoo!'s users on Christmas Day 1997 unless Kevin Mitnick is released from prison.
1998
  • Hackers break into United Nation's Children Fund Web site, threatening a "holocaust" if Kevin Mitnick is not freed.
  • Hackers claim to have broken into a 'Pentagon' network and stolen software for a military satellite system.
  • Hacker group L0pht, in testimony before Congress, warns it could shut down nationwide access to the Internet in less than 30 minutes. The group urges stronger security measures.

(Source: St.Petersburg times)

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Monde De Intrus - 1.03

US & the World, May 31st, 1998
All News Papers:
“A 12 year old kid, Jack Scythe who calls himself 'the Red Scorpion', was arrested for hacking into Zercthesky Royal Bank's ATM machines, has been ordered to be kept in close surveillance and must not use any type of Computer or Computer equipment & telephones at home until the legal age of 18".
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NYC, Dec 25th, 2004, 7.30am.
Jack wakes up with a hang-over from last night’s party. Scratches his brown crewcut head and his 3 days old stubbles grown on his pointed chin through his long/strong neck. Grabs and wears his glasses & peeps out through the gaps in between his black window blinds, sees rapid cars pass by, kids playing on the pavement & hears distant siren sounds. Turns back and yawns, hops out of the bed, walks to the kitchen, gulps in a glass of water, lights a cigarette, heats and drinks yesterday’s coffee. Opens the door with caution, looks left & right, grabs the paper quickly, closes the door firmly, goes into the bathroom, turns on the music (Metal), Sits on the bowl & Opens the paper
News:
“Third World War?” – US - Europe on fire.
USA: Nuclear missiles made to point towards European Union and were activated last night at 12. Government suspects it of a Terrorists activity!
Jack smiles at the paper, or rather grins at it.
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NYC, Sep 12th, 2002, 9.05am.
Eddinburough High:
Students and Teachers walking across the hallways. Girls and boys talking, shouting and messing around. The day begins with a normal morning at the school.
Chen(Jack's new mate): Hey Jack, how are your preparations? Dude! this s**t makes me puke!
Jack: Was up the whole night
Chen: You rock man, didn't know you were a geek!
Jack: (Smiles)
Chen : I dunno what I'm gonna do man, I mean, I can't study man, know what I'm sayin? I'm s**t scared man! I screw this s**t up, my parents kick me out!
Jack: Dont worry, you've got company. I've not touched the books either! but we wont be writing the exams
Chen: uhh! So...what the hell were ya doing last night? ohhh Partying? You got wasted man? ...Wait!...did you just say we Wont be writing the exams? Man your brain is fulla of S**t!
Jack: (Smiles/Grins) hold on...4...3...2...1...now!
The fire Alarm goes off! All the people inside the school building run out in panic.
Chen: holy S**t...what tha F**k...(Runs out too)
Jack puts on his usual smile/grin and walks out slowly. Yes, he had hacked into the school's fire alarm system.
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NYC, Dec 10th, 2002, 12pm.
All Students get an ‘A’ in all the subjects. The school was stunned, later found that their system was hacked.
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NYC, Feb 13/14th, 2003, 12am.
All the computers on campus get affected by the virus “LOVE”. When the PCs were turned on in the morning of Feb 14th, they saw a Text saying “I LOVE YOU”, and the screen went blank. The systems were crashed, all data were gone, grades, emails, reports, home works, everything.
Jack walks out the school with a proud grin on his face, keeps walking through the pavement near the playground, untill he finds a girl, a pretty girl in a pink tank top and a low-raise jean, pierced eye-brow and lips, her blonde hair with black streaks, but a face which will make us want to glance again. She was sitting on the grass, hitting herself on the head & mumbling something and appeared to be awfully upset.
Jack, out of curiosity, and maybe because its a girl, approached her and asked “uhh...Are you ok?”
Girl: Do I know you? Who the hell are you anyway? Do you ask ‘Are you ok’ to everyone you see on the streets?, buzz of B** Head!”
Jack: ow ow ow! girl, I’m sorry alright, my bad…go ahead with ur stupid mumbling!
Starts walking towards the gate muttering "Crazy B**ch !"
After 2 steps
Girl: I’m actually glad, but sad too
Jack (Stops walking & Turns around): I’m not asking anything, but you may continue to say whatever you were saying
Girl: I was supposed to do the I LOVE U thing tonight, but someone else did it before me! I wanted to do it because I scored the worst grades in my class!!
Jack: You a hacker too?
Girl: what do you mean ‘too’?...oh wait…are you…know way…you are not who I am guessing it to be…are you?
Jack: mm yeah, just did it for fun, this school is so F****d up, I hate it, the teachers suck!
Girl: I know, like totally, they are all morons you know!
Jack: So, what is your story, when did you join the club?
Girl: 2000, Traffic chaos…remember? 15 streets, all the lights were green, was arrested twice after that, for NYC Metro mess & NY Dreggs Bank – ATM Spit trick, actually was inspired by the Red Scorpion, he did a few years back. What about you?
Jack: I am the Red Scorpion.
Girl: !!!
Jack: Yeah, been under surveillance and shit, been really bad, had to construct my own machines, always the Public telephones for connections, constant use of signal jammers and stuff, its kinda interesting too actually. Now I use a different Handle though
Girl: and...what'd that be?
Jack: ...
Girl: C'mon...ok, lemme tell ya mine, its "PinkSting"
Jack: No way!! you are Pink Sting ? you were the one who booted me out from that Cable TV server that day? Sh*t !! You are insane I'm telling ya!!
Girl: So you are "Kryptonite" eh? haha funny, well anyways, it was my domain, for that time; you were actually inrtuding, I was supposed to hack and relay my own program that day! but hey, you got your revenge by the LOVE shit today, so we are even k?
Jack: hmm...Whatever.
Girl: Yeah, whatever…listen…uhhhh..
Jack: “Jack”, J.A.C.K
Girl: Like in Jack Ass? hehe, jus messin', hey listen, I gotta go now, may be we should meet up later sometime, what about this evening at the HJ?
Jack: HJ ?
Girl: Hackers Joint…duh!
Jack: Smiles (not grinning) Sure!
Girl: Aite, later then
She swung up on her skateboard (painted “INTRUDER”)
Jack: Hey…I didn’t catch your name
Girl: (who was already gliding on her skateboard, turned back smiling) its Cleo
The smiling face fades away as she hovers out of the school on her skateboard.
Jack (smiling too), starts to walk towards the exit, kicking the stones on pavement...

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Monde De Intrus - 1.04

Jacks Room - Feb 14th, 2003, 9pm.
Jack was lying naked on a bed which was in the middle of a star shaped pool filled with steaming mercury, 100s of candles lit in random patterns; he was breathing a pleasantly intoxicating fragrance. He suddenly felt like someone was licking him at the back of his ear lobe, while running their long-nailed fingers through his hair; he was filled with ecstasy, thrill and a tiny smile when he suddenly felt a cold, sharp metal object piercing/cutting through his skin, like someone is sketching on his back using a knife.
Now he sees the pool filled with blood, sees tons of skulls popping on the surface of the pool and the bed starts to float slowly. After a quick split it swiftly goes up towards the ceiling which has long sharp mammoth tusks pointing towards him, Jack closes his eyes as tight as he can, preparing for it, ‘it’, his body getting pierced by giant sharp tusks; he was moving up and up and suddenly everything stops, no movement, no sound, he could hear his heart pounding like the dogs'.
Jack slowly opens his left eye to see one of the tusk’s tip waiting to pierce through it. He slowly tries to turn his head to side which is when the bed turns upside down in a snap, making him flip out of the bed, falling towards the the pool of bloody skulls, falling and falling, the pool was widening, the blood started to boil, more skulls pop out. He was almost close, as close that he could smell the hot blood, as close as he could kiss one of the skulls...
Jack wakes up with a jerk and looks at the time, it was late for the party at HJ’s.
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Dag z’s house aka Hackers Joint – Feb 14th, 2003, 9.45pm
Jack stops his car in front of HJ, a dark, shady narrow street a block away from Tom’s bar. He leans and looks through his window to see the shady figures moving and dancing; breathing fumes generated from pot, cigars and cigarettes; serving and drinking plentiful amounts of cheap beer; loud, pulsating music; possibly a cash bar with generic shots; random hook-ups;
It was an acid party night there. He takes a deep breath trying to control his unusually pounding heart, may be because he is about to meet the Pink Sting? He walks towards the house with his head down as usual and touching the snow covered bushes on side when he suddenly senses that the door is being opened. He looks up to see someone coming out from a smoke, like an angel coming down from heaven…it was…
It was Fritz! Cleo’s boy friend!
Fritz: (Turns back and yells) Yo Cleo, c’mon out
Cleo comes out, actually jumps out through the 2nd floor window on to the patio to reach the steps. Fritz gives a nice vacuum kiss and gets back into the smoke filled house.
Jack, still at the end of the steps, Cleo now near the door, a tiny smile pops out of their respective lips which uncontrollably slips towards the either ends while trying to control, causing the lips + chin + cheeks to twist and turn and redden. They didn’t want it to be obvious nor did they want to appear to be timid.
After a brief heart pounding and overriding the usual chemical reactions that causes the butterfly effect, Jack starts to walk towards the door.
Cleo holds his right arm and drags him into the house. They make several trips to the cash bar, gulp in a few shots, a few cans of beer, share a joint (of weed), finish 3 packs of cigarettes and the night goes on.
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Middle of Nowhere - Feb 20th, 2003, 3am.
Jack wakes up, actually tries to. He tries to open his eyes, he was feeling really slouched, tried to remember Cleo’s name to call her, he couldn’t. Felt a sudden bright light filling the room. He was now able to open his eyes half way through.
He was sitting on a chair, in front of an olive green table. He was tied to the chair, he couldn’t feel his hands, they were numb, may be because the ropes were so tightly tied.
He heard the door opening with a shrill noise...

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Monde De Intrus - 1.05

The Room - Feb 16th, 2003, 3am

3 men enter the room.
Man 1: (6”3, bald head with a dragon tattoo, 2 scars on the right cheek in the shape of a Y, a missing ear, a limping walk and a Robert De Nero accent)
Jack Scythe, Age 17, Born in Atlanta, GA, Eddinburough High school, Separated Mom Ms.Uliya Scythe, hacked the Zercthesky Royal Bank's ATM machines at the age of 12, been under strict surveillance, yet managed to hack and mess into several realms…
Impressive!
Jack: (Ok Ok, cut the crap…come to the point you S.O.B) Where am I? Who are you guys?
Man 1: You are in a safe place, for now. We have been watching you for a few years now.
Jack: uuh...ok…
Man1: We would like a favor from you
Jack: I need a favor from you first, could you untie me from this sh*t??
Man1: Let me finish
Jack: J**z man...I can’t feel my hand...for Chr**t sake
Men:
Jack: Can I at least get something to drink? I’m thirsty; you don’t want me dead if you need a favor from me...right?
Man1: You will be, if you disagree or try to do something stupid
Jack: I promise…
Man1 to Man2: Pour l'obtenir quelque chose pour boire (Get someting to drink)
Jack: uuh...monsieur, café noir et beaucoup de sucre et quelque eau, merci (black coffee with lots of sugar and some water)
(Gets his coffee/water)
Jack: What!...am I gonna sip it like a dog?
Man1 to Man 2: délier (Untie)
(Gets untied)
Man1: As I said, we need a favor from you Mr. Scythe
Jack: (sipping his coffee) Who the hell are you guys? What stupid favor do you need? Why should I do it anyways?
Man1: (Sits on the table and comes close to Jack’s face, Jack could feel his ‘just smoked’ breath which elicits his urge)
Jack: (Leans back, away from the face) dude, can I get a cigarette?
Man1: (Gets his pack out of his coat and gives 1...Man2 lights it)
Jack: (After dragging a nice long puff) mmm…Ok...(another drag)... lemme know what you need, but first, why am I here, why was I tied? How/when did I come here?
Man1: You’ll get your answers son. I’ll tell you about the favor first.
Number 1: We want you to intrude into the army’s servers and activate the EMP (Electromagnetic Pulse – Can jam any electronic device in the radius of 8 miles) located in their Fort Meade, MD base
Number 2: Hack into FBI’s database to find and Erase the information about a person named Carliusc Hinle
Number 3: …
Jack: ow ow ow…what the f**k is going on here…what on this f**king Earth made you think I would do that for ya?
Man1: (unruffled) Do you know where your Mom is right now?
Jack: … ... ...Whats number 3?
Man1: Number 3: Place a piece of code in CIA’s Sea queen system to track their moves, you know they shouldn’t be able to find it and also shouldn’t they be able to track us down even if they find it
You’ve got 3 weeks time. You will be kept at our facility till then, all required gadgets would be provided to you, you would be free to go after that, and...
Jack: (who was looking dowan at the dirty, grey floor, looks up when the man paused)
Man1: Your Mother will be safe.
Jack:
Man1: ...
Jack:
Man1: ...
Jack: 3 days...
Man1: ...?
Jack: I'll finish this shit in 3 days, show me my place, I’ll be done and gone
Man1: Remember Mr. Scythe, Your Mom is a nice woman.

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Monde De Intrus - 1.06

(Day 3) - Feb 19th, 2003, 11.45pm

The toil was completed. Jack asked if he could go. He was dropped off in a dark alley near his apartment.
(The following Monday) - Feb 24th, 2003, 9am
Jack heard a loud door knock. He asked who was it, the voice from the other side replied that they were from the CIA. Jack’s heart froze for a split second.
Jack: Hold On guys…it’ll be a sec
Jack quickly ran to the window and climbed down the fire escape ladder. There were 3 SUVs already waiting for him. He was pulled into one those and they sped from there.
CIA Building, Monday 11.30am
2 of the men from the SUVs escorted Jack into the building. After passing the security clearance and the big CIA symbol on the floor, he was taken to the Administrative officer’s room. Jack was more jolted than he was with Man1
Dag z’s house aka Hackers Joint – Feb 15th, 2003, 1 am
Chen(woozy): Yo Jackie, my brother, I’m telling ya man, that was some cool sh*t. Guess what, I’ve done sh*t too, but ain’t huge, know what I’m sayin ?, the next sh*t I’m gonna do, its gonna be massive man. I’m gonna start a big brawl man.
NYC, Dec 25th, 2004, 7.30am.
Jack wakes up with a hang-over from last night’s party. Scratches his brown crew cut head and his 3 days old stubbles grown on his pointed chin through his long/strong neck. Grabs and wears his glasses & peeps out through the gaps in between his black window blinds, sees rapid cars pass by, kids playing on the pavement & hears distant siren sounds. Turns back and yawns, hops out of the bed, walks to the kitchen, gulps in a glass of water, lights a cigarette, heats and drinks yesterday’s coffee. Opens the door with caution, looks left & right, grabs the paper quickly, closes the door firmly, goes into the bathroom, turns on the music (Metal), Sits on the bowl & Opens the paper
News:
“Third World War?” – US - Europe on fire.
USA: Nuclear missiles made to point towards European Union and were activated last night at 12. Government suspects it of a Terrorists activity!
Jack smiles at the paper, or rather grins at it.
Jack: F*ck, this m*ther f*ckin SOB was serious!
On the Phone: This is Agent Jack Scythe, ID 0934333 (he called the CIA to inform about his Suspect)
CIA Building, Feb 24th, 2003, 11.45am
Officer: Welcome Mr. Scythe, have a seat
Jack: What am I doing here?
Officer: What would you like to have? Coffee? black coffee with lots of sugar and perhaps a cigarette?
Jack: !?!?!
Officer(smiling): Mr. Scythe, you have passed the test, the test of veracity
Jack: !?!?!
Officer: Yes Mr. Scythe, it was an appraisal. We have been watching you for quite sometime now. We know that you could break into most of the systems; what we wanted to know was if you would exert against your nation, under any circumstance; in your case, your mother in danger. You proved to be your country’s bigot. We did receive the piece of admonition that you sent us.
Jack: !?!?!
Officer: We had an EMP experiment under process in the Colorado Desserts, what you triggered was that and not the Actual Forte Meade system. We created a dummy name Carliusc Hinle in the FBI database which is what you gained access to. And finally the Sea Queen project, which was under test too and you managed to get through it, we actually need to fix the holes in it.
Jack: !?!?!
Officer: Before the shams book you, let me ask you this, would you be interested in working with the CIA?
Jack: !?!?
Officer: If yes, you will start as an Intern, since you are 17 at present.
Jack: !?!?
Officer: …uuhh…Jack!? Are you with me?
Jack (back to his senses): …err…will I get my own room?
CIA Building, Mar 1st, 2003, 8.45am
Jack parked his dirty blue truck in the parking lot. He gazed at the tall black building for a couple of seconds, took a gulp of air and walked towards it. He was supposed to meet his Supervisor, Ms. Nevah Trett. He went to the person at the reception and asked for her. The receptionist asked him to turn back; so did he…
Jack: C L E O?!?!?
Ms. Nevah aka Cleo (Smiling or rather grinning): Welcome Jack!

Aug 15, 2015:


"Parithranaya sadhunam vinasayacha dushukrutam

dharmasamsthapanardhaya sambhavami yugey yugey"

(For the protection of the Good, for the destruction of the Evil,
for the firm establishment of Dharma, He is born in every Age)
Year 2015
1000's of sordid corpses were burning all over the country, burning along with them were corruption, poverty, sleaze, inequality, and everything that was ominous for the Country till now
News: 1000's of Politicians from all parties and Government employees were massacred over night, the night of August 15th, 2015

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August 15, 1975
The village was evacuated due to the grotesque cyclone that night...the gruesome winds were decimating the trees, the roofs, the crops and anything that was on their path of destruction...all the villagers were havened in a near by church...
One of the women, Gauri, was dinning in labor pain…she was kept in a separate room along with a few other ladies. She was about to give birth to a kid, a kid with Fortitude, a kid who will create a Militia, a kid who will Reform his Country, a kid who will Revolutionize the Distorted political system, a notorious kid who will be called, known and hailed as Kalki.
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The Coup Tree
Kalki’s family moved to the city. His father got employed as a Clerk at the Regional Transport Office. Often times, Kalki used to deliver lunch for his father. He became pretty familiar about how the system works there; the System – Pay Money, get things done.
He soon realized that almost all the government offices work upon those lines. He found that no one did their duties; no one did their duties without getting paid, extra. Yes, they wanted money, apart from their salaries, to do their duties. He realized that there was corruption, anywhere and everywhere. He even found that his own father was corrupted.
He went to a government school. He found corruption there too. Teachers never come to classes, got money for passing students who haven’t even sat in any of the classes. A small coup tree had sprouted inside him by this time and it was growing and growing every time he came across such things. Besides all these, his interest in learning new things and additions to knowledge was also growing. He was an eager scholar at early ages.
He studied on his own and with some help from his friends. He excelled in his 10th grade and he got a free seat in a private high school. There too, people got money from students in the name of Donation. Watching all these, like any other person, he kept quite and studied. He came 1st in the state in his 12th grade.
Though he graduated with excellent scores, he was asked for Donation for his college seats. Tiny flower buds had developed in the coup tree at this time. His father was ready to either give the money or get some recommendation from his connections to get him a seat in a good college. Kalki refused to do so and got himself a seat in a Government College. He did a degree in Law and then tried his hands in Political Science and Psychology. He also studied by himself, IAS and Management courses without taking classes. He wrote a lot of papers and articles and was even sent to a lot of other countries for presentations. By then, Kalki’s coup tree had blooming flowers and fruits all over it.
He had several friends and was well known among them for his munificence and helping tendencies. One of his good friends was Rakshit. Rakshit was born in a lower middle class family. His father was an alcoholic and passed away when Rakshit was 18, leaving Rakshit’s mom and his crippled sister under his care. Rakshit did his undergraduate and started to do odd jobs. By that time, Kalki was sort of settled. He decided to help Rakshit, but he was not in a position to help Rakshit all by himself. Kalki contacted his common friends and asked them if they could chip in whatever they could to help Rakshit do his masters.
He was a little cynical about this, because he was not sure about how the other friends would respond. For his surprise, everyone offered to chip in and the collective amount came to be more than what was required for Rakshit’s fees. Kalki was amazed by this gesture from his friends and he concluded that there are a lot of people out there who want to help, but they don’t want to go out of the way to do it, they just wait till someone else trigger them and show the right channel or it just doesn’t occur to them. So, they all contributed and Rakshit completed his course successfully.
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The Coup club
During Kalki’s first few years of education, he also mastered himself in Brazilian Judo and Yoga. He started teaching classes for other friends and acquaintances. He taught them a lot of things, things that he saw, experienced and learnt.
He also did a lot of things like the one he did for Rakshit. He managed to form a big contributing, good hearted human chain which was linked through all parts of the country and some outside too. He came in touch with people from all walks of life, from lowest to the highest levels. He found that there are good people at all levels and tried to strengthen that chain more and more.
While this chain was growing and he emerged as a dominant figure, gaining respect and fame among them, he also started another chain.
For his other Chain, he slowly started to pick groups of people from various places, various walks, various levels, with ages ranging from 15 to 25. All of them were dispersed among different groups. Each group was to be specialized in something. The members of each group will be trained in a special field, fields like IT, IRS, Army, Police, Law, Politics, Education and all available fields that are involved in running the whole country. After the training, they all were made to work in departments of their respective fields.
They will not only work, but also monitor, act as a hidden cam, to throw light on the darker side of the those places. They stayed there and drew together all the details of the whole system in their respective departments; who is good, who is bad, who is corrupt, who does the job, who expects more, everything was noted and reported.
Soon they all were spread all across the country and across all the departments and offices. Whilst planting the seed of the coup tree in 1000s of other people in the chain, Kalki also managed to join the Army. By the age of 39, he was the Field Marshal, the highest rank in Army.

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The Plan
At the age of 37, with the confidence that he will be the next Field Marshal, he finally decides to plan his final move – The Execution of people in all departments, Levels 1 to 3 – Highjack a few 100’s of the political leaders – All in One night – the planned date was August 15th, 2015.
With the help of the long built enormous chain of his followers, he planned this colossal execution for 3 years.
The Day
The links from the chain where in position. Everything, except for a few things, went as planned. The massacre happened; the high jacks took place – Mission Accomplished.
1000's of sordid corpses were burning all over the country, burning along with them were corruption, poverty, sleaze, inequality, and everything that was ominous for the Country till now
News: 1000's of Politicians and Government employees from various departments were massacred over night, the night of August 15th, 2015. Army Field Marshal Mr. Kalki took over the country on a temporary Military Rule.
After addressing the world and giving several speeches and interviews, he ordered his links to find out the people who were responsible for this mishap, as an eye wash for the world. Over the next few months, 100s of people were arrested. They were the ones who were high jacked earlier. It was part of the plan.
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Kalki’s Reign
Kalki, as planned, soon arranged several meetings with the remaining people in the departments and the parties, who were mostly part of the chain. He had plans for almost all the levels before accomplishing his plan, he was absolutely prepared and he knew what to do next after every step. He streamlined the whole system; each and every department.
All the departments were shuffled, filtered and was engaged with the people from the chain. A whole new government was created from scratch, with educated people, who actually want to serve their country, who will construct a better country...a country everyone had only seen in dreams. He confiscated the old weeds, prevented them from growing back and sowed new & better seed. He helped people get another Independence.
He passed several bills which included,
ID Cards with unique ID numbers will be issued to all citizens.
Birth/Population Control - no one should give birth for 5 years from now. People can start giving birth after 5 years and not more than 1 child per family.

All political parties will be consolidated into one single party, with one aphorism. Groups of members of that party will take care of each state and the units.
All Politicians must hold at least a High school degree. Knowledge of English and basic Computing is mandatory. They must have a clean history with no criminal records.
All Government offices and buildings will be under Surveillance all the time. Anti-Corruption squads will be stationed. Anyone found guilty will be arrested and executed.
No educational Institution must accept any form of money or items/gifts in the name of donation. Students should be enrolled based on their knowledge and not based on money or caste or religion or recommendation.
And many many more...
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The Dream
"Gauri…Gauri…", a lady wakes Gauri from her Dream…”how are you feeling? Take your baby boy…look at him smile…looks just like you…”
Placing him on Gauri’s belly for warmth, the lady asks “do you have a name in mind?”
Gauri: “Yes…Kalki”
The lady turned and hollered to the crowd, ”It’s a boy…Kalki is his name”
And so was born Kalki, amidst a storm, amidst a crowd of cheering people…
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Tea Kadai (in Thanglish) - INCOMPLETE

3 tea poduppa...

Esus: enna pa epdi irukeenga? unga aalunga epdi irukaanga?

Allah: ada en pa nee vera, enga aalunga araajagam thaanga mudiyila, unga aalunga ulagam poora irukkura oorai- ellaam bomb pottu adichi navuthuraanunga, enga aalunga badhilukku podhu-makkala bomb pottu naasam panraanunga, idha-naala enga jaadhi aalunga ellorukkum theevira pattam vera kuthitaanunga!

Esus: avaru enna silent-a irukaaru?

Kris: aama pa, enga jaadhi kaarnga panra ragalaye thaanga mudiyila, jaadhi kulla jaadhi, adhu-kulla oru 100 jaadhi-ni enakkae kanakku vittu pochudhu

Esus: seridhaan, idhukku dhaan naan panna maadri onne onnu, sorry rendu rendu adhuvum ore jaadhi kulla, onnu enna kummidanum, illa enga amma-va kummidanum, avungalukulla avlo adi-thadi illa pa, ivangalukku enga jaadhi ulagam fulla parappardhey velai-ya pochu. 2000 varusham munnadi naan boomikku pona appo theriyaama konjam peru kitta namma power-a kaamichi, en pinnaadi vara vechitten, ippo ennadaa-na enga jaadhi-ya parappina udane sorgathukku poidalaamnu oorla irukkura ezhai paalai ellam valachi pudichi, avanungalukku soru, thanni pottu nice-a maathidraanuga!

Allah: enga aalungalu ozhikkardhukunne oru jaadhu undaachu, andha loosu pasnaga dhaadi-ya vazhikkaama, thala-mudiya vettaama, thalaila oru mundaas kattikittu, iduppula oru pazha-kathi-yoda thiriyuraanunga, savaram panra kaasu micham, avlodhaan, ivanunga thirundha maattanunga pa!

Kris: Pinna? Esus aalungalum, unga aalungalum ore jaadhi-lerndhu dhaan vandhaanga

Esus: Adha vidu pa, naanum Allah-vum ore kadavul-nu solrom, apdi solliye ivlo sacharavu nadakkudhu, unga allaunga enna da na oru 1 latcham kadvula-a kummidraanunga, adhu onne podhuma makkala prichi group form panradhukku, appuram ungalkukiulliye prechana varaama enna aagum? idhellam konjam over-pa

Kris: Esus, naan enna sonnen Gitai-la? Ellame naandhaan, enakulla dhaan ellame irukku, Indran, suriyan maadri chinna pasanga-la kooda neenga kummudaadheenga, enna mattum kummidunga-nu dhaan naan solren... kettanungalaa? mmhmm.. illaye road-la edhachum sengal-lo illa mile-kallo irundha podhu, udane adhukku manjal thadavi, kungumam vechi kallu-saami nu oru peru vechi oru undiya-lum vechidraanunga, enna panna solra pa? kaasu sambaarikku poli saamiyaarunga vera pudusa vitha kaati makkala emaathuraanunga, apdi paatha namma Greece epdiyaam? anga koodahaan, love-ku oru saami, sandai-ku oru saami, thanni-ku oru saami...

Allah: anaanlum unga range-ku illa pa, Greece ellam jujoobi

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Enna Koduma Sir Idhu... (incomplete)

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