Monday, June 04, 2007

Enna Koduma Sir Idhu... (incomplete)


scene 1


jean wakes up from a bad dream... his gf got raped and her throat got slit... wipes his face, takes a deep breath and goes back to sleep

next scene

cell 312, mental facility

a guy is sitting in a corner, hitting the wall - like hes stabbing someone (not showing his face)

next scene

jean's bedroom:
jean wakes up, watches the security video as he usually does every morning - in the vdo stream, ray (son of the villain) injects jean with a drug and yells/swears at him (for sleeping with his sister) - ray says, the drug will kill jean in another 3 hrs!

jean gets mad, crashes everything in his room & smokes out in his car... on his way, drinks lots of coffee, energy drinks, swallows energy capsules, commits a crime deliberately and makes the cops to chase him (just to increase his adrenaline)

the villain (ray's father) has a rival, jean works for the rival, jean goes to him/her for help, but (s)he wont help

next scene

kills ray and each of his mates in a sickening, bloody, graphic manner (shooting on the groin, cutting fingers, smashing feet with sledge hammer, slitting throats, cutting limbs, squeezing out eyeballs etc...)

on his way, goes to his gf, makes (wild) love (again, just to keep his heart pumping), and takes her with him

next scene

he goes to the boss's place... all alone

jean standing on one side (camera behind jean, just showing his back... slowly moves up, up and to the top and exposes a fleet of men on the other side staring at jean fully armed - all of then in leather jackets, suits, etc...)

the villain is now with jean's actual boss (they both signed a truce and would want to eliminate jean)

one of the villain's bodyguards tries to shoot jean, but ends up killing his gf (bullet puts a hole on her forehead - she has a blunt look, dark, thick, blood flowing out of the hole slowly and some smoke comes out of the hole too...)

gf is falling down in slow motion, jean holds her and lays her on the ground, sheds a drop of tear, (camera follows tear in slow motion) by the time the drop touches the ground, (hearing chopper sounds) around 50 guys drop out from the sky (from 3 choppers)

a common enemy (Japanese mafia?) to both the boss & the villain, helps jean (and himself ) in eliminating them

the fight begins, goes on, gun shots, flying bullets, splashing blood/flesh, piled up bodies, punctured walls... (similar to matrix climax - slow motion, sudden FFs etc...)

freeze the screen while... (Camera goes around, slowly... time freeze?)

a knife is very near to a guy's throat, a bullet is right next to guy's chest, a guy's fist right below another guy's chin, jean is about to stab the villain

next scene

mental facility, cell 312

guy still stabbing on the wall (unclear, shaken, glared scene)

next scene

all the frozen stuff are now shown in slow motion except for the ending parts, ex. the knife getting close to chest, fist getting close to chin, and FF suddenly the actual stab, blood squirting out, the jaw breaking punch, the stab from jean to the boss and slow down again... show everything again, the ending part... jean is stabbing the boss, again and again and again...

next scene

mental facility, cell 312

guy still stabbing on the wall (unclear, shaken, glared scene)

next scene

5 yrs back

jean, in 12th grade... fails in final exams, decides to commit suicide, goes to the top of a high raised building, (shaky, smudged screen - diff color scheme?)

but gets dizzy and faints (falls with a thud)

next scene

wakes up in a hospital, gets discharged, and sees this wonderful, gorgeous beautiful girl on his way out & falls in love with her

next scene

the suicide thing makes him delusional

the girl, the boss, him being a mobster, him getting the injection... everything is imaginary

everything he has done and that has happened to him are imaginary, but...

the murders are real...

he has been killing innocent ppl and kids. for him, they appeared like villains, but they were actually normal ppl/kids on the streets, houses etc

next scene

his doctor explains what happened to jean, his story, his medical condition to the medical assistant on their way.

screen splits into 2 (vertical, one in black n white and the other in color, but with some diff color scheme)

each imaginary killing is shown in one part of the screen and the actual killing in the other part - both should be in totally diff locations, lighting, makeup, costumes etc...

next scene

gets caught by the cops, hung upside down, gets beaten up real bad

then admitted to a mental facility

next scene

cell 312, mental facility

guy still stabbing on the wall

camera goes close to him

he/camera turns around...

he does not look anything like jean, has a completely diff physical appearance

next scene

he is being taken out from his cell for a medical exam by the doctor and the medical assistant

next scene

doctor lies on the ground, dead! with blood all over himself and on the floor

jean getting beaten up by the medical assistant, security guys are fast approaching, alarm went off, ppl running around the hospital, hearing screams etc...

the guy had finally killed the villain... he sits next to the wall with a (relieved) smile and tears.

Manidhan-Ver.3.1.0 (incomplete)

Black screen

Absolute Silence
...

A tiny pale yellow dot appears in the middle of the black screen

Becomes bigger, n bigger, n bigger... (Camera zooming in), fills quarter of the center screen

It Explodes (No sound yet (light travels faster))

BOOOOOOM, the vibrating, ear blowing BOOOOOOM

Explosion - yellow/orange light expands from the center in the form of a disc and irregular shapes in all directions, like a round object filled with magma exploding

Camera still zooming (Animation - moving deeper in Z axis)... Faster n Faster...

Getting closer....

Rocks scattering out of the explosion... 10s, 100s, 1000's...

There is this One Rock, out of the millions coming right in the direction of the camera, whooshhh!! Camera dodges it, take a U turn and Follows the Rock

Its just so fast, we can keep up, we loose pace, and then catch up (Camera slows down and picks up speed)

Following Rock in steady speed now

Other Rocks, Flaming Rocks, particles bits, pieces flying by, some so close to the sides of the camera, flying with whooshing speeds, some hitting the Camera (Rumbling/Shaking Effect)

Then a HUUUUUGE, Gigantic ROCK just smashes the Rock that the Camera was following from the Left

The Camera almost Crashed on it... but didn’t... stops like 1 mm, by then HUUUUUGE, Gigantic ROCK moves away, Camera follows the HUUUUUGE, Gigantic ROCK now

I slows down, gets hit by other tiny rocks, passes through a Huge gaseous region, now the Huge Rock become a Tiny dot

Camera passes through the clouds, suddenly starts rotating (like toilet flush). Camera zooms back, far away and the Huge cloud itself is rotating. Lots of exlposions occur, lots of particles fly around. The center becomes dark and bright, whole cloud still rotating

Fast Forward

Slow Down

Sun is formed

Fast Forward

All the Planets are formed one by one

Slow Down

Earth if formed

Zoom into Earth

It rotates, changes shape, Spits fire, burps smoke, coughs ashes

Its like somebody trapped inside this giant fire ball

Fast Forward

Slow down

Moon is formed

Fast Forward

Zoom back, away from the Solar system

All the Stuff spat, coughed, sneezed etc, change into different formations, some form lumps here and there, they collide, they bounce off, all sorts of circusy acts, the Solar System is Formed.

Camera starts traveling again by the other Planets, starting from the 10th planet, then Pluto and slowly near Earth

No atmosphere, just plain brown Earth, no life nothing

** All the below happen fast - Fast Forwarded animation **

Camera travels round and round and jumps in to the Water, the loose molecules getting to gether , the bubble formation, the 1st Cell, 1st DNA formation, the Plants, the Plants with Gills, the Worms, the fish, the Fish with Fins, the Amphibians, the Reptiles, the Dinosaurs, the Birds, the Dinosaur extinction, the Mammals, the Monkeys, (Baboons & Chimps)

**Camera slows, and comes back to play mode**
Camera follows 2 Chimps, 1 male chimp hitting (flirting) on a female chimp, a big chimp (father) comes out from the bush and beats the crap out of the the male chimp out

**Fast Forward**
Chimps evolve into Ape men

**Play Mode**
Camera follows 2 Apes, 1 male Ape hitting (flirting) on a female Ape, a big Male Ape (father) jumps from the Tree branch above with a bug Thud and beats the crap out of the male Ape

**Fast Forward**
Ape men evolve into the current Humans

**Play Mode**
Camera follows 2 humans, its a bus stop. 1 male human hitting (flirting) on a female human, a big Female human who is a Cop, jumps out of the Police jeep and beats the crap out of the male Ape

**Fast Forward**
Camera moves, current cars start flying, building rise sky high all the usual sci fi 'futuristic' looks come up

**Super Fast Forward**
In this mode, we can only see colorful lights, streaking the screen, like how it appears while a digital camera is shot in Night Mode from a moving train

**Slowing down**

~Have traveled almost 3 million years~

Whole screen is bright Yellow, cant see it directly, like looking at the Morning Sun with naked eyes

Camera zooms back slowly...

Zooming out from Sun

Sun is HUMONGOUS now!

Still Zooming out

Zoomed out and the Camera is outside the solar System

Sun had consumed, Mars and Venus, in the course of its expansion

Its Earth, which is right next to the Sun now. There are no more "9" planets in the Solar System, which is dying.

...

hmmm

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All the above animations should happen in around 5 minutes max, while I'm showing the Titles/Casting etc.

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Scene 1:

Black screen (again)

Mild wooosh, crrrp, crrrppp tk tk tk… sounds…

Lights On

Close, Profile shot on Kamal Hassan’s not clearly shown face, it is hidden partly by some object

Camera zooming out, very Slowly, from Kamal’s face

Still zooming out

He seems to be sitting by a tiny glassed rhombus shaped window

Still zooming out

He seems to be sitting in a train

Still zooming out

He is sitting in a train

Still zooming out

He is sitting in a train that is traveling from Earth to Moon, thru the transparent tube tunnel

He is going to his office; it is located in the Moon.

What his Company does: Since Sun is going to die in another 3 million years, they are working on 2 things, one is to move the Earth far away from Sun, so that it doesn’t suffer the damage and second is to make it independent of the Sun.

He is the Lead for the first project.

Scene 2:

(Office)

Camera is in a grey colored room

Cut.

Camera is following Kamal, pointing at his head, slowly zooming out (He is entering his boss’s office, the grey colored room)

Madhan Bob (The guy who keeps laughing for everything), in a totally different, stylish, out of of the world, but Funny get up appears as a holographic 3d image

Note:
After 3 million years, I do not know what language would the humans be speaking. I would be coming up with a language that is different from our current World languages, but it might probably have slight pinches from some of it here and there.

But, I would be enlightening the audience with English, Tamil and Thanglish Subtitles and will be using that here too…

Also, I need to work on the Looks of the Humans and other creatures. They would have evolved and would definitely have a totally different physical appearance.

Kamal: Sir.. awww…vandhu… andha… awww… Leave pathi solli irundheney. Adutha vaaram, adhaan remind panradhukku vandhuen

Madhan Bob: He he he he he, yov, adha marandhutten ya, unnaku oru project assign panni irukka, adha adutha veilli kezhama kulla mudichaaganum un vacation-a adutha Varushathukku thalli vai

Note: Since the Sun became so big, the TIME changes. Earth’s Rotation and Revolution times change, so the Morning, evening concepts change. Since Sun is so Big and Earth is so close to it, the shadow formed on the other side of it is so tiny, that the Night actually lasts only for a few minutes.

Hours are the new minutes, Weeks are the new Hours… you get the picture!

Scene 3:

Kamal, walks out of the Boss’s room with a Long, Sad face

He gets on to his Hover pod and he floats on it takes him to the train station. On the way, he sees this (holographic/3D) advertisement board on the wall, with a lady talking about this really cool deal. It is a Travel Agency, but with a Difference.

Scene 4:

That travel agency office.

Kamal is waiting in the waiting area while watching their holographic/3D tours displayed

He is invited to an Agent’s office. He walks in. He gets all the details. Camera is outside the glass room, we cant hear what they are talking.

Kamal walks out with a Relieved, Happy face.

Scene 5:

A Residential area… Not the one that comes up in our minds always, the one with birds chirping, dogs barking at a distance, a long, a calm street, with identical houses, with a few kids on the road, playing , cycling, hitting each other, a few cars parked on the sides, neighbors, chatting, some people mowing lawn, dogs etc… no, none of these.. hey its after 3 million years, remember?

I’ve not decided yet, but probably, the Earth would not have much on the surface since it is so close to the Sun, all slowly went UNDERGROUND.

The houses are build different, suitable for the underground stuff, people are different, animals are different, some new species, some old species but would have evolved into something else…

Silence

A big Woosh sound all of a sudden…

Few kids are racing

One if flying, one is running faster than the speed of light, one is going completely underground, like the Moles, only wayyy faster

People of the road… Some have 2 heads, some have 6 hands, some have 5 eyes, some walk upside down, some have tails, some fly, some are amphibiotic, some can survive in space without oxygen etc, etc

Yes, people have evolved, not mutated… into something they wanted to, into something we all want to, with natural, normal abilities, that are at present considered as Super Powers.

Manidhan – Ver 3.1.0

Scene 6:

One of the kids that was flying, goes home, with the same speed after losing the race.

Note: This kid is neither a Man nor a Woman, but a completely new branch of Human. But for the current audience, I’m going to have him as a Male.

So, he goes to him room and sits on bed but gets knocked off by something on the bed

It is his Sister who can become Invisible. Laughs at him, fights with him and returns to her room.

Kamal, comes home. His wife.. Guathami? Comes home from the bottom.

Gauthami’s office is at Earth’s Core. They work on a project to control the Core’s temperature.

The family gets together and the kids start asking Kamal about the big vacation that was planned for the following week.

Kamal: aaww… mmm… Sorry, Boss vera project assign pannittaru, so adutha vaarapm poga mudiyaadhu… aww… I am .,. awww.. sorry

Kids and Mom are very upset, they start going back to their rooms and Kamal shouts, “adutha vaaram dhaane poga mudiyaadhu, aana namma innikey ippove kelamba poroooooommmm!!!!”

Kids and Mom turn back to him with a mixed emotion on their faces…

They ask whats this all about and Kamal explains about the Travel Agency

Kamal: Naan office mudinji vandhuttu irundhayna, appo oru Ad paarthen, oru Travel Agency Ad, saadhaarna Travel Agency illa, it’s a TIME TRAVEL AGENCY!!!

Yes, namma inniki ippove 100 years to the Past travel panna porm! Idho paarunga passes!!!

Kids and Mom were surprised/shocked/not too excited/not too happy. But still they just packed got their stuff and left for the Agency office. They were welcomed by Kamal’s Agent and the preparations for the travel were going on.

They boarded the Time Machine. It was a huge Starfish shaped machine.

They all were given tranquilizers to sleep during the travel to avoid fatigue.

All of them were given, but Kamal should take it a little later since he had to do the in house preparations for the others.

Machine started, weird noises heard, lighted up in all directions, the machine rose up slowly, rocking back and forth, in a rapid movement

Noises became louder, rocking became faster n faster

Bhoooofff! (A noise) and the screen is Black.

Scene 7:

Screen is still black

Hearing some distant faded noise, slowly becoming loud

It’s a familiar noise

It’s a musical noise

It’s the Thaarai and Thappattai !!! (Saavu Melam)

Getting louder and louder

The music passes by, as if a train passed from right to left… (Doppler effect) Slowly faded, but can still hear it from the distance

A Tamil Paatty’s voice: Thambi… thambi… kozhandha.. indha pa… amma… endhiringa… pozhudhu vidinjidichi… endhiringa.. yeppa, indha pa… adha endhingna

Black Screen

Kamal, slowly opens his eyes, like how we open our eyes from sleep, but his lids open the other way

Unfocused camera (Kamal’s just woken vision) focusing

A weak, old Patty is standing next to Kamal, trying to wake him up

Its Year 2007, they are in a small hut in Nochi Kuppam, near Koovam! (Yes they have traveled back 3 million years!)

Patty: Appa, endhirichiteengala? Unga inga ittandhu, 4 naalu aavudhu, inna ba aachu ungalukku? Ipdi 4 perum adchi potta maadri 4 naala thongine keereengo? Paakardhukku vera oru maariya keereengo? Enna samachaaram? Edhacham naadaga kottailerndhu odi vandhukuneengala???

Scene 8:

Back in the Time machine, after giving the tranquilizers…

To be contd…

Enna Koduma Sir Idhu... (incomplete)

scene 1 jean wakes up from a bad dream... his gf got raped and her throat got slit... wipes his face, takes a deep breath and goes ba...